Where are my shoes?

I must go tonight


I must take a suitcase


Big enough to contain my shirt of loneliness


And walk in a direction


Where epic-singing trees can be seen;


Towards the vast wordless expanse which keeps calling me.


Someone called me again: Niny!,


Where are my shoes?

Where are my shoes?
You left them at the Pschiatrist%26#039;s office.
Reply:Same place as yer bra
Reply:On your feet.
Reply:you never paid for them
Reply:excellent poetry that stretches reader%26#039;s own imagination by deploying misdirection known as %26#039;intentional fallacy.%26#039; i like the profound intensity of walking %26#039;Towards the vast wordless expanse which keeps calling me.%26#039;
Reply:on the windowsill.
Reply:Have you looked behind the fridge?
Reply:Very effective repetition of line %26#039;where are my shoes%26#039;. Sorry to be prosaic but if the shirt of loneliness is yours, what conceivable size would it be to need special consideration about %26#039;a suitcase big enough to contain%26#039; it ?
Reply:Dorothy took them
Reply:Very clever, I like it a lot. Repetition, extremely effective, epically poetic in style. More please.
Reply:u left them in my car come and get it
Reply:Niny? Should that be Ninny?
Reply:Your shoes are missing? That%26#039;s weird because your poetry writing skills are missing also. Maybe they are hiding from you together.
Reply:Not to worry here borrow my car, hurry! jeesh
Reply:Have you checked your Refrigerator?
Reply:try under the bed
Reply:still in the shoe shop in a box.
Reply:The question is...where are your feet?
Reply:gone to look for your brain
Reply:Under the bed???
Reply:i have no idea
Reply:Ah therein lieth the rub, our lass has nae shirt oan her back could it be the shoes are hidden beneath the large shirt that is filling up your suitcase. Or mayhap the suitcase is standing in them?


If not perhaps the epic-singing trees can whisper where they might be headed. But I know this for certain............








Your shoes will BE
Reply:I really don%26#039;t know.


honestly.





But, I%26#039;ll have a pint of what you%26#039;ve been drinking !
Reply:under the stairs??
Reply:Beautifully wrought around refreshing subject matter with dreamy imagery and a crafty little stumble at the end that makes you scan back and realise you have been tripped by someone familiar with their craft.




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